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Broken Hearts Chapter 1


Character Intro

All girls are 21 years and Boys are 22 years old... They are completing graduation from a very renowned college..

Avni
The Fashion icon of College.. inspiring everyone with her looks everyday... Sincere towards studies.. got admission by scholarship and Dance champ of college...

Krusha
Bestie of Avneet.. Sweet and Funny... Not so addicted to studies... Always going on dates..

Sid
Only Charm for the girls because all others are already booked 😂 Hottest out of all but still single.. Basket ball team leader and always on time person...

Fainnat
The most adorable couple of the college.. Sweet as sugar and Flirts go side Rule 😂

Jannat is studious and so is Faisu... BUT BUT BUT... Faisu can't stop staring her when she is around.. Faisu is also a good friend of Sid

Story begins..
Chapter 1

Sm1- Hey babe.. Are you ready?
Kru- Oh sorry.. I forgot to tell you that I am going on a date so I won't join you to college...
Sm1- You are telling me this now.. Oh shit.. I will miss my first lecture of Second Semester...
Krusha- Come on.. Professor won't start without you *in a funny tone*
Avni- *giggles* You won't ever change..
Krusha- Never
*and both cuts the call*

Avni- Bhai I am leaving.. and I am taking the car bcoz Kru isn't coming today to pick me..
Zayn (Avneet's brother)- Okay... Take care
Avni left

Otherside in the college at Basketball court..
*Sid and Faisu were practicising their moves for the upcoming inter-college competition*

Sid- Let's try to douch at the goal point..
Faisu- Okay I will pass and you make Goal..
Sid- Nah.. it had been 2 years now everyone knows I always make the goal.. let's confuse everyone..
Faisu- How?
*keep on making strategy and practicing the moves*

Otherside- group of Bad boys
Rishi- Where is College ki Charm
Lucky- Our Bhabhi..? *teasingly*
Ri- Nah.. just another crush..
Lucky- Oohhh.. *looks at other side* My girl is here.. I am leaving...
Ri- Where is Miss On Time.. she left her place long time back *and avneet reaches*

Avni parks the car and enter Corridor while adjusting her hairs... As she enters all eyes are on her.. Simple yet beautiful with little makeup..



Rishi blocks her way as he is always trying on her..
Rishi- Hey cutie..
Avni- I have got a name.. Mr. Oblivious *removes his hand and goes inside the class*

The boys near them laughs at Rishi and Ri gets furious at her behave... He gives a glare to them and one of them comes to him and says he should try on someone who is easy on him.. not the one out of his standards...

Rishi left with a glare to them..

Ri- *in mind* You won't be wearing this attitude for long...

End of Chapter

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  1. Unknown15 August 2021 at 02:02

    Nice chapter 👏🏼👏🏼

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  2. Unknown15 August 2021 at 02:09

    What a story

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  3. Unknown15 August 2021 at 02:13

    Good

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  4. Nitya Zijoo15 August 2021 at 02:34

    Very nice chapter

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  5. Nitya Zijoo15 August 2021 at 02:35

    Good start

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  6. Unknown15 August 2021 at 02:44

    What a story di. Superv.🤗🤗🤗

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  7. Unknown15 August 2021 at 03:11

    When will you post next chapter of Curse??!!!

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  8. Unknown15 August 2021 at 03:16

    I love it di ❤❤👏👏

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  9. Unknown15 August 2021 at 03:41

    Nice story🤩

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  10. Unknown15 August 2021 at 04:04

    Nice one.. I hope I read it regularly coz I just leave others on mid.. But this sounds super fascinating.. 💜

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  11. Newt15 August 2021 at 04:25

    Nice Chapter Didi :)

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  12. Unknown15 August 2021 at 04:54

    it's really cool can't wait for next chapter please post fast ;)

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  13. The_Adrija_Sutradhar.15 August 2021 at 05:51

    Always you write a great great great chapter diii.
    You should be a writer diii amazing

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  14. The_Adrija_Sutradhar.15 August 2021 at 05:51

    Can't wait for next chapter diiii....🔥🔥🔥😍😍😍😍

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    ❤️❤️

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  16. Unknown15 August 2021 at 06:52

    very nice ishita di love it

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  17. Unknown15 August 2021 at 13:05

    Nice chapter 😍

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    Wow very nice loved it

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  19. Khushi15 August 2021 at 16:10

    Woww

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    It's amazing

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  21. Khushi15 August 2021 at 16:10

    Can't wait for 2 chapter

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  22. Khushi15 August 2021 at 16:11

    Best

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  23. Unknown15 August 2021 at 16:30

    very nice ♥️

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  24. Friendship15 August 2021 at 16:34

    Waiting for chapter2

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  26. Unknown15 August 2021 at 21:43

    Love your work di 😘

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  27. Unknown15 August 2021 at 22:06

    Amazing story

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  28. Anushka16 August 2021 at 00:26

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  29. Unknown16 August 2021 at 01:23

    Please upload next chapter soon

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    I just loved the story

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    Sidneet forever'

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  52. Unknown16 August 2021 at 18:02

    very nice job🥰

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  53. Unknown16 August 2021 at 23:03

    Nice

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  54. Lily17 August 2021 at 00:58

    Its really nice.I am here for for the first time and got addicted. Your story is just like the Chinese drama, when I was reading this chapter I got the vibes of watching Chinese drama.can I get the link for the another chapter?

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  55. Unknown17 August 2021 at 01:45

    Love this story..

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  56. Unknown17 August 2021 at 04:00

    Who is rishi and rii

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    1. Unknown17 August 2021 at 20:00

      rishi dude in real life he was playing in ye ristha kya kehalatha hai serial rishi dev ri bhaiya go and check rimorav vlogs channel you will get to know him

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  57. Unknown17 August 2021 at 04:04

    My name is priyanshi
    Your story is too much amazing i really like your fanfics 💕 i don't like to watch stories that much but when i watch your stories they are really amazing i love to watch them 💜

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  58. Unknown17 August 2021 at 15:53

    Bice

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  59. Unknown17 August 2021 at 17:11

    😍lovely 😍

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  60. Unknown18 August 2021 at 12:18

    Lovely

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  61. SidneetGorgeousFanfictions20 August 2021 at 03:28

    Can you please make Avneet’s character strong??! I mean in almost every fanfic she is a weak and depended on someone type of girl
    Please for god’s sake make her strong in this one

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