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Broken Hearts Chapter 9

Avu- *closed her eyes* Sid.. I..

*Before she could say further she felt loud foot steps and she opened eyes... She saw Sid running away*

Avu- *she was shocked* He pranked her... *In mind* how I wish it was real.. *she thought about what she just thought but without thinking about it.. she ran behind him to make him pay for it*

Avu- *running behind him* Sid.. come back or I will eat your mango ice-cream..
Sid- don't dare to bring it in between.. *chuckling*
Avu- *she was running behind him with pillow but suddenly her leg twisted... and she fell on floor..* Ahhhh...

*Sid thought it was a prank too so he left but when she didn't get up.. so he got worried and ran back to her..*

Sid- What happened avu.. you okay? *concerned*
Avu- Noo... *Tears she was controlling until now... rolled down her cheeks*
*Sid quickly sat beside her and called his mom to come upstairs*

Sid- Areee.. don't cry plz... *He quickly wiped her tears and tried checking if her leg was swollen or bruised*

Avu was looking at him and wincing at times when sid tilted her leg

Sid's Mom came

Mom- What happened avu? *Concerned* *Her concern turned into anger on Sid and she gave a deathly glare to him* Why is she crying.. you hurted her?
Sid- Look at me.. *making puppy face* Can I ever hurt her...?
Avu- are mom.. I fell and started crying and he came back to help me.. he is so caring.. 🥺🥺
Mom- Oh then it is good.. 😇

Sid- *rolled his eyes seeing how his mother is no longer taking his side... but inside he is happy also because he haven't seen her this happy ever*

Sid- *he left his thoughts at side and asked Avneet to stand up* Okay Avu try to stand up..
*Avneet followed but her leg hurts so she bent down again*
Mom- Avu be careful..

Sid don't want to see her in pain so he took her in bridal style.. means he took her in his arms... Avneet wasn't expecting this so her face collided into his neck and her finger trailed his  muscles..

Mom- Finally a thoughtful thing... *Chuckling* Okay drop her in your room today
Sid- My room..??
Mom- Hmm.. it is risky to come downstairs like this..
Sid- hmm.. I know
Mom- Good boy.. I will bring first aid for her...
*Sid agreed and took her in his room*

*In room*
Sid asked her to be careful as he was making her sleep on bed..
He leaned to place her on bed but her left hand slipped off his shoulder making right hand to pull him over her..

It was the first time when both of them were this close... Sid on top of her and Avneet under him.. Avneet's eyes were closed.. while sid couldn't process anything seeing her this close.. and without any thought he placed a kiss on her lips..

Avneet's eyes opened in a jerk.. she looked at him who was lost in that kiss and kept on staring at him but soon he got back to senses and their eyes met..

Sid's POV
Sid *in mind*- Oh shit sid... What you just did... I don't regret it but still what would she think about me.. will she think that I fell on her purposely.. god.. what I just did...

Sid quickly stood up

Avneet's POV
Avneet *in mind*- Is he regretting kissing me.. may be he is.. or what if he is thinking that I did it on purpose..

Sidneet *in unison* - I am sorry.. I lost Balance.. It was my fault...

Their eyes met again but in an instance the eye lock broke because his Mom entered...

Sid quickly left as he was feeling shy of Avneet.. also he have to prepare and rediscuss things with Faisu for his Inter College Basketball Tournament.. which is tomorrow

They have been winning since long and sid have planned something for Faisu this time... so it is important

What will be Avneet's reaction after their First kiss..??
Goal- 50+ comments
No copy paste plz

Comments

  1. Wowww sid is feeling shy 😂😂 supperr chap 😍❤ and plss all subscribe to my youtube channel plsss😭🙏🙂

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  2. And plss post curse chap 19 plss😁❤

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  3. omgggggggggggg. this one is the most romantic chapter.

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  4. wow. it is romantic. loved it.

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  5. so romantic di. pls post more fast..

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  6. woah. this chapter comes too fast..

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  7. thanku di for posting this chapter.

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  8. amazing di. how can u be so creative. loving it 😍

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  9. just loving the chapters ❤️❤️

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  11. Cannot wait longer pls post the next chapter ❤️

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  12. D pls post the next chapter of curse also pls

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  13. Please dii post next chapter also

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  14. If possible try posting all the chapters at once only🤣🤣

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  15. Dii pls post the next chapter

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  16. Everyone please comment fast

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  17. Please complete 50 Comments before 2pm today itself fast
    And *do not copy past* please

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  18. Please do it as soon as possible

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  19. 35 comments already done only 15 more to go….fasttttt

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  20. it is the best fanfic. pls post more

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  21. Woww one of a best chapter ❤️

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  22. Wow I can't gather words to praise your story

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  23. When I read the line of kiss... I was feeling like 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈😂😂😂😂😘😙😙😚😚
    Dii the best chapter ever.....😀😀😀😀🥰🥰🥰♥️♥️♥️♥️

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  24. Wow what an amazing chapter loved it .

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  25. You are such a amazing writter

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  26. I am waiting for next chapter this is also very good chapter

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  27. looks like you are working so hard on it

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  28. This is the 50th comment please post the next chapter

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  29. romance is full no fire. love this chapter.

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  30. pls post fast di. can't wait for more..

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  31. Amazing chapter😘 excited for next one🥰❤

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  32. D its is already 50+ comments pls post next chapter as soon as possible

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  33. When I was small then I felt online comics like manga boring but after seeing your fanfics I am attached to manga's

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  34. I guess she will not make a fuss out of it

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  35. I guess sid will make the basketball match live too

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  36. I know you work on a individually but sill if you could add more characters like anushka , rits , ashi riyaz , Abhishek so it would be more of a fun

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  37. I guess 50 comments are done so when will you publish 10th part

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