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Broken Hearts Chapter 18

Avneet was leaving when she saw something.. it was a note... 

Note says.. hey go to your room and find the most special thing there.. may be you find something..

Avneet quickly went to her room and checked her books... *Lol books kiski fav hoti hai anyways 😂😂* she didn't found anything... She checked here and there and she got another note with a chocolate near her earpods.. 

Note says "Oh you found me.. I thought books will take time lol.. Next go to the place where you find your fav thing in night to  eat and find me there.."

Avneet- *next in kitchen..?* *In mind* let me just catch him for once.. I will surely kill him if he is doing a prank by placing these notes.. I mean okay it is cute but still...

She went in kitchen.. Sid's Mom and Dad are now sleeping because all the work is done and they have to wake up early as always...

Avneet in kitchen

What he meant by my night craving..? Cake..? She opened refrigerator and checked but no clue.. she checked other things but found nothing.. then she realized it is Ice-cream... Okay I found the slip... It says.. "take the ice-cream it is for you.. and bring mine too 🤪 okay then find me where you can see the sky.. she ran to her room and went to her balcony.. all empty.."

Avneet- ugh... Not even here.. In his room's balcony..? *She went and checked but he isn't there*

Avneet- I am not finding you mr.. *she folded her hands and went to her room* I will eat your ice-cream too.. *she quickly teared cover of his ice-cream cone and took a bite* after taking the bite she realized all the chits are correct then this can't be wrong.. she started thinking again and oh yes...

*She silently ran from her room to the terrace.. she opened the door and saw sid looking at the sky*

Sid- so you finally found me..
Avneet- ofcourse.. afterall I am the miss intelligent..
*To this sid chuckled*

She moved towards him..
Avneet- Why all of a sudden.. so many chits..and..
*Before she could complete.. the whole view changed*

The lights started blinking.. *not the way it does on Ghost story but like we use in Diwali decoration*

She looked around.. there was a small canopy and lights were around it.. there was a small dinner area with candles and he bend over to have her hand in his.. which she quickly placed in his..

Avneet- this feels so dreamy yr..
Sid- bcoz it is like that..
Avneet- hm..?
Sid- I mean first take a seat..
Avneet sitted and sid took the rose from table..

*Sid's leg is shivering as he is so nervous..*

Sid- I don't know how to tell you this... Bcoz it is first time for me as well but the day I saw you..your style.. your smile.. your way of rejecting others too..*little laugh* the way you enjoy with friends... Being happy with even the smallest sweet thing... I don't know when but I did.. I just fell for you...

Luckily I got an incentive too and that was being with you 24/7 ❤ I don't know how you will react but for me.. It took long to realise that I started loving you.. I don't know how I feel so nervous to tell you all this.. I don't want to be dumped like others though it was funny... *Laughs again* but.. *turns serious* I love you and I want to confess this to you that you are the most beautiful girl I have ever met in my whole life.. I want to be the one who makes you smile everyday.. do you accept my Love..?
*Finally looking at her*

Avneet- What.. 😳😳😳

*Btao yes or no*
Anyways I am not a pro in proposing so bear with me.. 🤪 Anyways 70+ comments mean No and 80+ means Yes...
Zayn and Rishi coming soon stay tuned ❤

Comments

  1. Thanks for posting ❤️❤️
    yes

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  2. Lovely post literally waiting for the next chapter.. Hopefully she will say Yes. Get well soon di
    By Karisma♾️

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  3. Exited for the next chapter di

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  4. Yes! Yes! Yes! But of course add some humour

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  5. Di i have tell u many times but again I am telling u that u r writing skills are just amazing....I think answer will be Yes...

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  6. Di thanks for posting 😘 because u are not feeling well today... Get well soon 😉 we all are with u. Lots of love 💖💖💖...

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  7. Exited for the next chapter do post it very soon

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  8. She should say yes and give him a big hug

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  9. Di your stories are just amazing

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  10. First she shd say no and tell that it was a prank then yes

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  11. Wonderful chapter diii.
    I think She will said yess🤩😍hope so dii you are an amazing writer

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  12. I think she will say a bigg yes

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  13. Please 🥺 publish next chapter soon

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  14. U r really a romantic person

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  15. Please upload next chapter soon

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  16. I m really excited for the next chapter

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  17. Please upload next chapter soon and a big one

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  18. She should say Yes and probably give him a long passionate kiss

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  19. Amazing and it has to be yess

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  20. Your stories are so nice di please post next chapter soon, dhe should say a big yes....❤

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  21. we want villans too it will be more interesting

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  22. 80+comments are done plz post next chapter 🙏🙏

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  23. Plz continue curse here and others on YouTube too

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  24. Di 80+Comment is done now pls post the next chapter pls we cant wait 😭

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