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Broken Hearts Chapter 18

Avneet was leaving when she saw something.. it was a note... 

Note says.. hey go to your room and find the most special thing there.. may be you find something..

Avneet quickly went to her room and checked her books... *Lol books kiski fav hoti hai anyways šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚* she didn't found anything... She checked here and there and she got another note with a chocolate near her earpods.. 

Note says "Oh you found me.. I thought books will take time lol.. Next go to the place where you find your fav thing in night to  eat and find me there.."

Avneet- *next in kitchen..?* *In mind* let me just catch him for once.. I will surely kill him if he is doing a prank by placing these notes.. I mean okay it is cute but still...

She went in kitchen.. Sid's Mom and Dad are now sleeping because all the work is done and they have to wake up early as always...

Avneet in kitchen

What he meant by my night craving..? Cake..? She opened refrigerator and checked but no clue.. she checked other things but found nothing.. then she realized it is Ice-cream... Okay I found the slip... It says.. "take the ice-cream it is for you.. and bring mine too šŸ¤Ŗ okay then find me where you can see the sky.. she ran to her room and went to her balcony.. all empty.."

Avneet- ugh... Not even here.. In his room's balcony..? *She went and checked but he isn't there*

Avneet- I am not finding you mr.. *she folded her hands and went to her room* I will eat your ice-cream too.. *she quickly teared cover of his ice-cream cone and took a bite* after taking the bite she realized all the chits are correct then this can't be wrong.. she started thinking again and oh yes...

*She silently ran from her room to the terrace.. she opened the door and saw sid looking at the sky*

Sid- so you finally found me..
Avneet- ofcourse.. afterall I am the miss intelligent..
*To this sid chuckled*

She moved towards him..
Avneet- Why all of a sudden.. so many chits..and..
*Before she could complete.. the whole view changed*

The lights started blinking.. *not the way it does on Ghost story but like we use in Diwali decoration*

She looked around.. there was a small canopy and lights were around it.. there was a small dinner area with candles and he bend over to have her hand in his.. which she quickly placed in his..

Avneet- this feels so dreamy yr..
Sid- bcoz it is like that..
Avneet- hm..?
Sid- I mean first take a seat..
Avneet sitted and sid took the rose from table..

*Sid's leg is shivering as he is so nervous..*

Sid- I don't know how to tell you this... Bcoz it is first time for me as well but the day I saw you..your style.. your smile.. your way of rejecting others too..*little laugh* the way you enjoy with friends... Being happy with even the smallest sweet thing... I don't know when but I did.. I just fell for you...

Luckily I got an incentive too and that was being with you 24/7 ā¤ I don't know how you will react but for me.. It took long to realise that I started loving you.. I don't know how I feel so nervous to tell you all this.. I don't want to be dumped like others though it was funny... *Laughs again* but.. *turns serious* I love you and I want to confess this to you that you are the most beautiful girl I have ever met in my whole life.. I want to be the one who makes you smile everyday.. do you accept my Love..?
*Finally looking at her*

Avneet- What.. šŸ˜³šŸ˜³šŸ˜³

*Btao yes or no*
Anyways I am not a pro in proposing so bear with me.. šŸ¤Ŗ Anyways 70+ comments mean No and 80+ means Yes...
Zayn and Rishi coming soon stay tuned ā¤

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  1. Aa20 October 2021 at 01:10

    Thanks for posting ā¤ļøā¤ļø
    yes

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  2. Unknown20 October 2021 at 02:19

    Lovely post literally waiting for the next chapter.. Hopefully she will say Yes. Get well soon di
    By Karismaā™¾ļø

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  3. Radhamani20 October 2021 at 04:25

    Exited for the next chapter di

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  4. Sidneet Forever20 October 2021 at 04:28

    Yes! Yes! Yes! But of course add some humour

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  5. Sidneet Forever20 October 2021 at 04:28

    you write so well di

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  6. Sidneet Forever20 October 2021 at 04:28

    waiting for the next ch eagerly

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  7. Unknown20 October 2021 at 06:27

    It's just amazing šŸ‘Œ

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  8. Unknown20 October 2021 at 06:29

    Di i have tell u many times but again I am telling u that u r writing skills are just amazing....I think answer will be Yes...

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  9. Unknown20 October 2021 at 06:34

    Di thanks for posting šŸ˜˜ because u are not feeling well today... Get well soon šŸ˜‰ we all are with u. Lots of love šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’–...

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  10. Unknown20 October 2021 at 13:27

    Exited for the next chapter do post it very soon

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  11. Unknown20 October 2021 at 13:28

    She should say yes

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  12. Unknown20 October 2021 at 13:28

    She should say yes and give him a big hug

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  13. Unknown20 October 2021 at 13:29

    Wonderful chapter

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  14. Unknown20 October 2021 at 13:47

    Di your stories are just amazing

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  15. Unknown20 October 2021 at 17:10

    Hell

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  16. Unknown20 October 2021 at 17:46

    First she shd say no and tell that it was a prank then yes

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  17. The_Adrija_Sutradhar.20 October 2021 at 17:52

    Wonderful chapter diii.
    I think She will said yessšŸ¤©šŸ˜hope so dii you are an amazing writer

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  18. Vidhi20 October 2021 at 17:58

    Very nice chapter šŸ˜

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  19. Vidhi20 October 2021 at 17:58

    Next chapter soon ā¤

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  20. Vidhi20 October 2021 at 17:59

    Definitely a big yes šŸ˜Ž

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  21. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:32

    very nice

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  22. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:32

    pls say yes

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  23. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:34

    say yes avneet

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  24. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:34

    pls yes

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  25. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:40

    She should say 'yes'

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  26. Unknown20 October 2021 at 18:41

    I think she will say a bigg yes

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  27. Rahila20 October 2021 at 19:33

    Nice chapter ā˜ŗļøšŸ˜šŸ˜

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  28. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:01

    Loved the chapter

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  29. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:02

    She will probably say yes

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  30. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:02

    Please šŸ„ŗ publish next chapter soon

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  31. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:03

    U r really a romantic person

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  32. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:03

    She will definitely say Yes

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  33. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:04

    Sidneet forever

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  34. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:04

    Omg šŸ˜± loved the chapter

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  35. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:05

    I šŸ’• sidneet

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  36. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:05

    Di loved the chapter

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  37. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:05

    Please upload next chapter soon

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  38. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:06

    #sidneet forever' and ever

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  39. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:07

    I m really excited for the next chapter

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  40. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:07

    Please upload next chapter soon and a big one

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  41. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:08

    Definitely say Yes

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  42. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:09

    She should say Yes and probably give him a long passionate kiss

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  43. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:32

    Lovely ā¤

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  44. Unknown20 October 2021 at 21:44

    Amazing šŸ„°

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  45. Unknown21 October 2021 at 00:21

    Amazing and it has to be yess

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  46. Unknown21 October 2021 at 01:28

    Yesssss

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  47. Unknown21 October 2021 at 01:53

    Loved itā¤ļø

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  48. unknown21 October 2021 at 02:19

    plz plz yesss

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  49. Radhamani21 October 2021 at 04:37

    Your stories are so nice di please post next chapter soon, dhe should say a big yes....ā¤

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  50. Nitya Zijoo21 October 2021 at 04:54

    Lovely chapter

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  51. Nitya Zijoo21 October 2021 at 04:55

    Plz post next chapter soon

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  52. Nitya Zijoo21 October 2021 at 04:56

    Get well soon

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  53. Unknown21 October 2021 at 14:39

    say YESS Avneet !!!!!

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  54. Queen butterfly21 October 2021 at 18:38

    Say ''YES'' avuā¤

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  55. Unknown21 October 2021 at 21:47

    Such a cute chapter

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  56. Unknown22 October 2021 at 03:15

    its awesome

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  57. Unknown22 October 2021 at 03:15

    i just loved it

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  58. Unknown22 October 2021 at 03:16

    its amazing

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  59. Unknown22 October 2021 at 03:16

    we want villans too it will be more interesting

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  60. Unknown22 October 2021 at 03:17

    she will say yess

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  61. Aa22 October 2021 at 18:00

    80+comments are done plz post next chapter šŸ™šŸ™

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  62. Nitya Zijoo24 October 2021 at 13:48

    90 comments are done

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  63. Nitya Zijoo24 October 2021 at 13:49

    Reading again and again

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  64. Nitya Zijoo24 October 2021 at 13:51

    Plz continue curse here and others on YouTube too

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  65. Nitya Zijoo24 October 2021 at 13:52

    you are a gifted writer

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  66. Unknown24 October 2021 at 14:47

    Please post nxt chapter

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  67. Queen butterfly24 October 2021 at 18:31

    Di 80+Comment is done now pls post the next chapter pls we cant wait šŸ˜­

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  68. Unknown24 October 2021 at 18:42

    Post the next chapter

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  69. Unknown24 October 2021 at 23:56

    Pls post the next chapter

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  70. Unknown26 October 2021 at 01:14

    Pst the nxt chp di plsssss

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